In the paragraph "In 1952 a white singer" change "1952 is also the year in which Dick Clark's "American Bandstand" tv program" with
1952 is also the year in which Bob Horn's "Bandstand" tv program
(which in 1956 would become Dick Clark's "American Bandstand")
In the paragraph "Musicians were allowed" remove RCA from Other Worlds Other Sounds (RCA, 1958).
Zappa period: replace "the title-track of Jean-Luc Ponty's King Kong" with "the 19-minute Music For Electric Violin And Low Budget Orchestra,
off Jean-Luc Ponty's King Kong
Remove "Elektra" from Buckley's Goodbye And Hello (Elektra, 1967)
The innovative album by Jesse Colin Young is Young Blood (1965), not Soul of A City Boy (1964)
The correct titles of Soft Machine's albums are Volume Two (1969) and Three (1970). And the track The Moon In June needs "the". The last sentence in parenthesis of the Soft Machine paragraph must be rewritten (out of parenthesis) as: for example with the four-movement suite Virtually (1971), on their fourth album, and the futuristic 1983 (1972), on their sixth album.
The correct title of Robert Wyatt's album is The End Of An Ear ("the" is missing). And 'outpouring" is mispelled.
A comma should be a period in Henry Cow's paragraph (after "expressionistic cabaret and rock music")
U2: Change the text
Bono Vox (Paul Hewson) and guitarist The Edge (Dave Evans),
The most successful band of their era,
with
Led by Bono Vox (Paul Hewson) and guitarist The Edge (Dave Evans),
Change the rating for Blacktop to (1). Add "guitarist" after Gories and add "guitarist" after "Comeback's". Change "pop" with "beserk". So the sentence should read: Blacktop (1), the creature of former Gories' guitarist Collins and former '68 Comeback's guitarist Darin Lee Wood, went beserk on
The line "and Roland introduced the first keyboard enabled with MIDI (Musical Instrument Digital Interface), a system to connect musical instruments to computers." must be replaced with "and Sequential Circuits introduces the "Prophet 600", the first keyboard enabled with MIDI (Musical Instrument Digital Interface), a system to connect music instruments to computers."
Replace Her Handwriting (1996) with Broken By Whispers (1999) for the Trembling Blue Stars.
Replace the sentence on Ooioo with
Ooioo, the side-project of Boredoms's drummer Yoshimi P-We and a few of her female friends that began as an exercise in hyper-deconstruction of kitsch, juxtaposed all sorts of musical debris in the suites of Feather Float (1999) and Taiga, vaguely reminiscent of the aesthetic ambitions of progressive and psychedelic music but insanely playful.